For me, storytelling
is one of the most important aspects in conveying a point/message. Good storytelling
can captivate a person and make them want to know more about your topic. A
story that has a consistent flow makes it easier for a person to follow and
understand. I feel good authors/storytellers know how to express important information
at the appropriate time and know how detailed the information should be. When applying
this to the campus signage project, I feel that starting from when you first found
the sign is a good place to start. Starting from the beginning would help to explain
why someone finds the sign and why it was unappealing to them. Going into detail
as to what could be done to change the sign to make it stand out more and
showing the steps you take to make those changes is important as well. Finally,
I feel that when presenting the redesign, it was important to show the differences
with side by side pictures of the original and the redesign. This way the audience
can see the exact changes that were made and form their own opinions.
You are the master of pacing ... such a great job w/ your redesign presentation! Maybe we can get you to post the "before" and "after" images?
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